Poetry: Time

So I’m continuing my poetry bend for haikus in 2011. Which version do you think works better?

Moments turn in to days,
days travel on till months are gone,
tomorrow’s years are now here.

or

Moments turn in to days,
days travel on till months are gone,
tomorrow’s future is now here.

Before tomorrow ends

Before tomorrow ends.

Before tomorrow ends a new world will have began – again,
The history yet written will find it’s way in to the pages of time,
People will rise and fall between the mundane reality before them and the reality of the hidden sublime that exists in the corners of our collective eyes and the fertile imagination of our hearts and minds.
Tomorrow hides itself in the shadows of the mystery of what has yet for us to be and the majestic sunset of antiquity soon to dawn that is yet to be born before tomorrow ends.