The last Silent Sabbath

The Sabbath was silent,
Silence replaced the normal Holy Days joy.
No angels sang nor prophets prophesied,
as the holy words seemed hollow
since the Promised King had died without raising a single sword.
The veil laid torn,
the blood stained the ground,
and soldiers guarded the tomb,
as the world waited to see if hope would ever be reborn.
Little did anyone know this would be the last silent sabbath before the world would see Hope restored.

A date, a plate, and fate

A man born of the past who was constantly late,
met a modernist and they to began date.

Little did they know they were dating their future mate.

Later they spoke the Tena’im and broke the plate,
and sealed a future deal for their marital fate.

Their postmodern sensibilities showed that they could not wait,
as they discovered the three of them were in a pleasant though surprising state.

Poetry: Time

So I’m continuing my poetry bend for haikus in 2011. Which version do you think works better?

Moments turn in to days,
days travel on till months are gone,
tomorrow’s years are now here.

or

Moments turn in to days,
days travel on till months are gone,
tomorrow’s future is now here.